The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three type of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.
The proportion of three different nutritions including
sodium
, saturated fat, and sugar
added in food are found in general meals and is illustrated in the form of pie charts. It is considered that some kinds of them would not be good for health if people had consumed them often.
Overall
, sugar
holds the highest percentage
in snacks, while
dinner
and lunch
contain the largest percentage
of both sodium
and saturated fat. Whereas
, breakfast
contains the least amount for all three.
According to
the pie charts, the highest proportion of additional
sugars is found in snacks at 43%, Replace the word
added
while
breakfast
has the smallest percentage
of added sugar
at 16%.In addition
to that, dinner
and lunch
have the second and third largest percentages of sugar
at 23% and 19%, respectively.
Other substances such
as sodium
and saturated fat show a similar percentage
in both dinner
and lunch
. Looking further
into the details, sodium
is found in equal amounts at breakfast
and lunch
at levels of 14%. Next,
the second chart shows that dinner
accounts for the largest amount of saturated fat at 37%, followed by lunch
(26%) and snacks (21%). With the least amount of saturated fat (16%), added sugar
(16%) and sodium
(14%) is breakfast
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