"Due to low revenue in 6 months, your company is going to change its policy, especially the deduction of lunch allowance that makes you not happy. Write an email to the Human Resources Department: saying you do not agree with this change explaining why the employees deserve to receive former policy stating your suggestions how to help your company overcome the difficulty of finance Try to write a minimum of 50 words"

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"Dear Human Resources Department, I'm writing to express my disagreement with the proposed lunch allowance deduction
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recent revenue challenges. The allowance not only aids financial stability but
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reflects the company's appreciation. I suggest temporary
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or flexible alternatives to balance cost cutting with employee welfare. I look forward to hearing from HR Department soon. Best regards, Hoang Thi Thu Thuy"
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