Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform you about my loss.
Last
week, I came to London by
plane
and lost an important bag when I got off. Please look at the attached document in which you find the information about the
plane
. When I got off the
plane
, I was late for an important meeting at Jardy Hotel. I remember I have
last
seen my bag on the chair beside me on the
plane
, I hope it is still there. It is a small black handbag with a golden symbol on the front side. It contains important documents, My credit card, and some cash. but what really concerns me is the new camera that I bought recently for my brother's birthday. I would be grateful if you check on it and come back to me with positive news. I am staying at Jardy Hotel for another week and here is my contact information: 076 004 532. I am looking forward to your response, yours faithfully, Faten Daas.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Airliner, oversight, misplaced, personal belongings, valuable items, sentimental significance, luggage retrieval, lost and found, passenger service, tracking, compensate, verification of ownership, promptly, inconvenience, coordinate, verify, transparent communication
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