You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: 1. Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired 2. Your energy and enthusiasm for the job 3. Your past experience in a similar position.

Dear Sir/Maam, I am writing

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letter regarding the job as a staff nurse in your hospital. I saw your job advertisement in Indeed

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week and I am interested in

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position. I graduated with a Bachelor of Science in nursing in 2009. I have post experience of 5 years in a reputable hospital.

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, I have proven to be a compassionate, dedicated and hard-working person

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handling and managing critically ill clients. I believe my qualifications are more than enough to be hired by your company.

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, my past experience in a tertiary hospital will be the same position as my roles and responsibilities are giving high-quality care services to the patient and the necessary leadership skills to inspire other staff members

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, is necessary to provide the above levels of services.

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and

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forward

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and giving me an opportunity to work in your company. Yours sincerely, Janey

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Aug 13, 2023

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task response

Expand on the reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company and how your qualifications match the job requirements.

coherence and cohesion

The greeting and closing need to be more formal and professional. Address the recipient by their name and use a more appropriate closing phrase.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

156 words

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