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You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: 1. Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired 2. Your energy and enthusiasm for the job 3. Your past experience in a similar position.

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Dear Sir/Maam, I am writing
this
 letter regarding the job as a staff nurse in your hospital. I saw your job advertisement in Indeed
last
 week and I am interested in
this
 position. I graduated with a Bachelor of Science in nursing in 2009. I have post experience of 5 years in a reputable hospital.
Moreover
, I have proven to be a compassionate, dedicated and hard-working person
as well as
 handling and managing critically ill clients. I believe my qualifications are more than enough to be hired by your company.
Additionally
, my past experience in a tertiary hospital will be the same position as my roles and responsibilities are giving high-quality care services to the patient and the necessary leadership skills to inspire other staff members
Thus
, is necessary to provide the above levels of services.
Hoping
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 and
looking
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look
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 forward
for
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apply
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you to
consider
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considering
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 and giving me an opportunity to work in your company. Yours sincerely, Janey
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task response
Expand on the reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company and how your qualifications match the job requirements.
coherence and cohesion
The greeting and closing need to be more formal and professional. Address the recipient by their name and use a more appropriate closing phrase.
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