The bar chart below shows the top tem countries for the production and consumption of rice in 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top tem countries for the production and consumption of rice in 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the ten nations that grew and ate the most
rice
in the year 2020.
Overall
, Bangladesh is the only country where
rice
consumption was higher than the amount of
rice
produced, and the figures for Hungary and the Philippines far exceed the other eight countries in both
rice
grown and eaten. Of the ten countries on the graph, Bangladesh was unique in that it was the only nation to produce less
rice
than it consumed, with 53 and 58
tonnes
, respectively. Hungary produced and consumed the most
rice
in 2020, with 540
tonnes
grown and 532
tonnes
eaten. The Philippines was the only country close to Hungary’s figures with 410
tonnes
produced and 387
tonnes
consumed. For the other eight nations, the production of
rice
was between 106 and 49
tonnes
, and the consumption of
rice
was between 104 and 45
tonnes
. For both of the categories, India was the highest of these eight countries, and South Korea was the lowest.
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