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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates predicted changes in the
population
 of
India
 and
China
 between the
year
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 2000 to 2050.
Overall
, over the 50-
year
 period,
India
 is going to experience steady growth in its
population
 and it will overtake
China
.
On the other hand
,
China
’s
population
 will peak in 2030 and
then
 begin to fall. In the
year
 2000,
India
’s total
population
 was the lowest at 1.0
billion
,
compare
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 to
China
 which was two times higher at 1.2
billion
.
However
, in the
year
2023
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 both surged at
same
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 level of
population
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 with almost 1.42
billion
population
 respectively.
Moreover
, both are expected to soar rapidly to the expected
year
 2030 at 1.45
billion
 respectively. In the
year
 2030, both countries
China
 and
India
 intersected respectively.
Furthermore
, from the
year
 2030 to 2050
China
’s
population
 is likely to sink at 1.4
billion
.
In addition
,
India
 probably overtook
China
due to
assumed
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 increment of numbers with the prediction of
1.6
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a 1.6
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billion
population
 in the
year
 2050.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, india, china, year, billion with synonyms.
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