The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.
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ratio
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, pet caring, and fixing the house based on their gender in a country. The given Correct your spelling
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second
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provides a comparison of the amount of Use synonyms
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time consuming
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time-consuming
time
by gender.
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men
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housework
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, the proportion of Use synonyms
women
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time
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housework
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men
.
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housework
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cleaning
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60% and 40%, respectively, the figures for Change preposition
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women
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80%, and 60%, respectively. When it comes to house repairs, those of Change preposition
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men
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with 10%. Use synonyms
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20%.
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men
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for cooking and cleaning is 60% and around 40%, respectively, those of Use synonyms
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82% and 68%. The most significant difference that can be observed Correct subject-verb agreement
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