The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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he given bar chart how many residents in the UK spend their money in three categories (
Food
and drinks, restaurants and hotels, and Entertainment) during 2004.
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Overall
, what stands out from the chart is thatLinking Words
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food
and drinks experienced an upward trend during the period in question, Use synonyms
while
restaurants and Linking Words
hotel
were the least sector Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
people
spend their money on in all age groups and it showed down ward trend during 2004.
Regarding the provided details, in 2004, youth's Use synonyms
food
and hotel expenditure accounted Use synonyms
by
5%. Change preposition
for
then
it saw a significant increase between Linking Words
people
from 31 to 45 and Use synonyms
this
expenditure increased to around 7%. after that, Linking Words
food
and drink spending saw Use synonyms
a
steady growth until it reach its peak for elders who Remove the article
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is
bigger than 76 years Change the verb form
are
people
by 23%. Use synonyms
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contrast, Capitalize word
In
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people
who enjoy spending their money on entertainment there was a similar rate from the age of 30 until 45 and presented by 6%. Change preposition
for people
then
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spen increased slightly for the age category from 40 to 60 years and it rose around one of twenty. and old Linking Words
people
from 61 Use synonyms
food
expenditure and those from 76 and more Use synonyms
spent
for entertainment and Change the form of the verb
spending
food
was equal. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
people
from 61 to 75 restaurant and hotel spends were bottom of the list and accounted for less than 2%.Use synonyms
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