Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?

It is true that females and males have different physical and psychological characteristics, and

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some people argue that professions or jobs that need more physical strength are suitable for

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, and

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should not be allowed to do these physical jobs.

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, I vehemently believe that

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and

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should be given the same opportunity to choose any kind of job they like.

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it is true that

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generally have more physical power than average

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,

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does not mean that

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could not perform

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-stereotypical jobs like becoming an engineer or fishermen. A survey conducted in Indonesia reveals that there is an increase in the number of

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working in fields that previously were exclusive to males,

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as pilots and programmers. Indeed, in

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modern era, there are various technological equipment in place, making it possible for

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males and females to do any kind of task equally. The world we living had a dark history of discrimination against

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.

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, the government and society should work together to promote equality for

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genders, by giving the same opportunity for them to work in all sectors. Personally, I believe that choosing a job or

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should be based on preferences and talents, and not because of gender.

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, having

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genders in any

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may be seen as a positive development.

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many

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work as police officers, and

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, the attitude towards police officers has changed in Indonesia. These days, many citizens start to see police officers as kind and respected individuals. In conclusion,

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and

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are generally seen as having different personal characteristics, I believe that it is not right to exclude any gender from any

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. Having

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genders in any

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there is may actually give that

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richer insights.