The line graph below shows changes in the youth unemployment rate from 2000 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares how the
unemployment
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rate
among young people aged 15-24 changed over a
12-year period (2000-2012) in five
European countries.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
rate
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unemployment
grew noticeably in all European countries with the exception of Germany. Of particular note are Italy and Germany, where Use synonyms
unemployment
rates were highest and lowest respectively for the better part of the period.
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youth
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unemployment
underwent a drastic rise in Britain and Sweden. In 2000, the Use synonyms
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stood at 10% in Britain, which had doubled by 2008. Use synonyms
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figure grew to about 27% in 2009, but it had fallen to a quarter three years later. Linking Words
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climb ,Use synonyms
initially
the percentage stood at just over a tenth, and it had gone up twofold by the end of the period.
The figures for the other countries Linking Words
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changed, albeit to a varying degree.
The proportion of unemployed Linking Words
youth
was just under 30% in Italy in 2000, which dropped to a fifth in 2008.
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This
was followed by an exponential rise, hitting an all-time high of nearly 36% in 2012. The Linking Words
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also
went up in France, going from 20% in 2000 to 25% in 2012. Linking Words
Finally
, despite some fluctuations, the Linking Words
rate
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unemployment
remained unchanged in Germany, at about 10%.Use synonyms
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