The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.

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The given line chart illustrates the number of employees in 3 different jobs which are manufacturing, services and agriculture in the USA from 1975 to the present and

also

predicts the trend till 2025.

Overall

, there is a noticeable fall in the number of farmers through these 45

years

In contrast

, services increased sharply and it is predicted to have the same behaviour for the next

years

According to

the chart, cultivation was the most popular job in 1975 and 80

million

people in the USA were farmers which was 8 times more than the other jobs’ employments.

Although

this

job was popular for individuals for the following 2

years

, it experienced a dramatic drop to 40

million

by 1980. The same trend continued till now and it is predicted that it will decline to the region of 10

million

employees in 2025.

However

cultivation lost its popularity among people, services noticed a significant rise during these reported times and it is considered that it will reach 90

million

in 2025.

Moreover

, a fluctuation can be seen in manufacturing starting from the same figure as agriculture, reaching its peak which was 40

million

in 1980 and a steep drop for the following

years

to its initial point.

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