The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future. ▪️Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.

▪️Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates information about the number of employed people in three different sections in the United States since the year 1975 and anticipation for 2025.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the service section has seen an upward trend in the trend and it will be continued to go up
while
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agriculture has witnessed a downward one over the whole period. Regarding the agriculture and service segments, as can be seen, both of them experienced two opposite trends.
In other words
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, at the beginning of the period, the population of individuals who worked in agriculture was 80
million
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then
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it decreased significantly in the years between 1977 to 1979 to about 45
million
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.
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, with a slight decline in 1980.
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, it is predicted that
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downfall trend will be continued to about 10
million
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in 2025.
On the other hand
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, the number of employed people in service was 10
million
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in 1975 which increased gradually until the year 1979
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, soared until now and it will continue increasing in the future as well. Turning to the manufacturing section, it witnessed a fluctuation over the period it had 10
million
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people working in plants in the year 1975
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increased to 40million in 1980but
then
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decreased substantially to the same number as its beginning (10
million
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).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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