The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of six types of work in employees and self-employed people by gender and job in manual and non-manual in Great Britain in 1997.
The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of six types of
work
in employees and self-employed people by gender and job in
manual and non-manual in Great Britain in 1997.
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Overall
, the percentage of males
in managerial and professional work
was considerably higher.
In manual work
, the overwhelming majority of workers were males
by
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24
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of 24
while
females
rate showed 3% in crafting or similar. As mentioned above, in non-manual job
, most men worked in managerial and professional spheres showing 36 Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
percent
while
approximately one-third of women worked in this
area. In other manual works were marginally difference
in their proportion: for Replace the word
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females
27%, for males
26%. Six percent
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per cent
males
worked in clerical or related work
in comparison to females
which rates 31%.
General labourers were least popular among males
and females
showing two and one percent
. Nine percent
of female works in non-manual occupations, Change the spelling
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while
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proportion for males
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