As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
In line with the shift in time, there are growing concerns about
job
satisfaction
. In this
essay, I will present some factors that contribute to satisfaction
and point out the realistic expectations
of workers
' job
satisfaction
.
To begin
with, there are two main factors that contribute to job
satisfaction
which are salary
along with
other employee’s
benefits. The primary reason behind Change noun form
employee
this
could come from the fact that with a high-earning job
, workers
could have money to pay their bills, save money or take care of their family, such
as paying their children’s tuition fees or supporting their old parents’ health. Besides
, employee’s
benefits could be Change noun form
employee
also
important when having a job
that provides enough days off, rewards and annual traveling
fees would motivate employees to be more effective in their ways of working. Change the spelling
travelling
For instance
, Vietnamese people usually expect to earn about 30 millions
VND a month because it could help them to both pay for their daily expenses and save money for the future.
Despite some Change to singular
million
expectations
that employees hope to gain from their jobs, I believe that it is impossible to satisfy all worker job
expectations
, and this
includes two main factors. First of all, there are a lot of people whose abilities do not qualify their salary
expectations
, and it could lead to disappointment. For example
, graduates often look for a job
that could offer them a high-income right after graduation, while
having a high
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high-salary
salary
job
requires people to have a lot of working experience and satisfy the company criteria. On top of that, not only the salary
might be disappointing but also
the working environment could not satisfy workers
. This
seems to stem from the fact that colleagues could come from different backgrounds, which vary from age groups, races, levels of society, and something along those lines, so it is clear that
arguments and conflicts would appear more easily. Therefore
, not getting along with
their coworkers could be a big problem that might lead to workers
not being comfortable with their own jobs.
After considering this
issue, I have come to the conclusion that when salary
and employee’s
Change noun form
employee
benefit
could build Fix the agreement mistake
benefits
to
Change preposition
apply
workers
’ job
satisfaction
, the working environment as well as
their actual salaries might be disappointing to employees.Submitted by thucbiapluto on
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