As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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In line with the shift in time, there are growing concerns about
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satisfaction
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. In
this
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and point out the realistic
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of
workers
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'
job
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satisfaction
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with, there are two main factors that contribute to
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satisfaction
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which are
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along with
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other
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benefits. The primary reason behind
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could come from the fact that with a high-earning
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,
workers
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could have money to pay their bills, save money or take care of their family,
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as paying their children’s tuition fees or supporting their old parents’ health.
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,
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benefits could be
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important when having a
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that provides enough days off, rewards and annual
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fees would motivate employees to be more effective in their ways of working.
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, Vietnamese people usually expect to earn about 30
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VND a month because it could help them to both pay for their daily expenses and save money for the future. Despite some
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that employees hope to gain from their jobs, I believe that it is impossible to satisfy all worker
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expectations
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, and
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includes two main factors. First of all, there are a lot of people whose abilities do not qualify their
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expectations
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, and it could lead to disappointment.
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, graduates often look for a
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that could offer them a high-income right after graduation,
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having a
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salary
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job
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requires people to have a lot of working experience and satisfy the company criteria. On top of that, not only the
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might be disappointing but
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the working environment could not satisfy
workers
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.
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seems to stem from the fact that colleagues could come from different backgrounds, which vary from age groups, races, levels of society, and something along those lines, so
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arguments and conflicts would appear more easily.
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, not getting
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their coworkers could be a big problem that might lead to
workers
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not being comfortable with their own jobs. After considering
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issue, I have come to the conclusion that when
salary
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and
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benefit
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could build
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workers
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job
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satisfaction
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, the working environment
as well as
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their actual salaries might be disappointing to employees.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job satisfaction
  • wellbeing
  • contribute
  • meaningful work
  • work-life balance
  • career progression
  • workplace environment
  • recognition
  • constructive feedback
  • compensation
  • benefits
  • job security
  • autonomy
  • skills match
  • interests match
  • variety
  • challenge
  • economic conditions
  • labor market
  • individual expectations
  • job role
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