the diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purpose. summarize the information, and make comparison. write at least 150 words.
The figures demonstrate the two processes of making
cement
and concrete which are used in the construction field.
Overall
, the making of cement
is first carried out which can be used later in producing concrete. The cement
is a mixture of Clay and Limestone, but concrete is made using other materials.
In the making of cement
, the Limestone and Clay are crushed into fine powder and then
mixed together. This
mixture is then
passed through the rotating heater , heating the material and which is further
ground into its finest form to make cement
. Then
it is packaged into bags for transportation and storage purposes.
The concrete is formed in a concrete mixture, using major components like Gravel(50%), Sand(25%), Cement
(15%) and water(10%). This
blend majorly consists of gravel which is smaller particles of stone and the equipment used for the production is a huge rotating barrel .Submitted by tasnimasm2 on
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