The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart provides information about the percentage of men and

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in Australia between

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of

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who

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involved in physical activities during the year 2010.

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, it is clear from the bar chart that men who had done physical exercise , experienced a downward trend,

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women

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showed an upward trend throughout the period

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group that crossed above 65 and over. Both genders' physical

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had some fluctuations. Even though men

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had a high percentage, it became slightly equal with

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at the end

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of

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the period

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, male physical

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was about 52.8% between the

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15 to 24, being higher than female

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levels

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4%.

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to almost 42.2% between the

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25 to 34.

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, the figure showed a gradual decrease to about 39.5% between the

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group 35 to 44, and continued to incline steadily to the end of the period, reaching around 45% between the ages of 55 to 64 and hitting a point of 46.7% ages 65 and above.

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of physical

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by females was 47.7% between the

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15 to 24. and it inclined 48.9% between the ages 25 to 34.

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, the histogram experienced a steady growth during the next three

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. It rose 52.5% from 35 to 44,

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increased by around 53.3%

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ranging from 45 to 54 and remained steady for the next year.

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women

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had undergone growth for several

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, they failed to maintain between the

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62 and over.