You are going to visit New Zealand for an 'English and Homestay' program. You have just received details of your homestay host family. Write your first letter to the family. In your letter •introduce yourself • ask the family some questions to get information that is important to you • tell the family about your arrival date and time

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Dear Mrs & Mr. Nelson, I am Josephy, an Indian national and a member of

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and Homestay programme. I am extremely delighted to be mentored by you and to reside at your place to learn about

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Zealand. I received your letter yesterday and have been keen since

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to know some basic details.

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be reaching New Zealand on the night of 25th August 2023 at

9:00

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9.00

P.M. by Go India Airlines. As you know,

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is my first time visiting your country, I would like to know about the weather conditions during my stay, so that , I can pack my clothes

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want to know what books

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I need to carry that can help me understand culture and traditions better.

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, I would appreciate

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vegan food could be served, as I am 100% vegetarian. To sum it up, I am super excited to meet you all and have a wonderful experience learning and exploring the country, and

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vast customs. Hope to see you soon. Yours sincerely, Josephy.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

187 words

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