The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided pie charts compare the domestic, agricultural and industrial
water
drinking in six major parts of the world. In general, the highest percentage of water
is utilised for agricultural purposes in Asian
, African
and South American countries while
about half of the water
in Europe
and North America
goes to industrial sectors.
As can be seen from the pie charts, North America
's water
consumption has a striking similarity to that of Europe
. In both of these continents, about half of the water
is required in industrial sectors, almost one-third for crop cultivation and 13-15% for people’s household use. Interestingly, South America
’s water
-absorbing habit is quite contrary to the North American region and it is more like the water
expenditure in Asian
and African
continents. A great portion of water
goes to the agricultural division in Asian
, African
and North American countries which is over eight-tenths of their total utilization. The highest water
expenditure in cultivation could be observed in Central Asia (88%) which is almost triple that of Europe
. Household water
use in South America
is higher than in other parts of the world and stands at 19%. Only 7 to 9 per cent of water
is used by people in Asian
and African
countries for their personal use at home. Finally
, the industrial water
consumption in Asian
and African
areas ranges from 5% to 12% and this
ratio is quite lower than that of Europe
and North America
. Interestingly, Southeast Asia uses more water
for manufacturing than Africa, Central Asia and South America
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