The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The
pie
chart
shows the comparison of energy
production
between 1995 - 2005 it is clear from the
pie
chart
that the
rates
of the products like Coal,Gas, and Petro are the highest rate in the
pie
chart
,
while
the other products like nuclear and
other
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have the lowest
rates
.
According to
what is shown, presented in the
pie
chart
the year 1995 the
rates
of
production
of Coal, Gas and Pero were the same rate,it was between 29.27% reaching 29.80 almost the same ,
while
the other productions like nuclear and other are lower in the
pie
chart
.
On the other hand
, In 2005 the
rates
of Coal and gas kept on increasing until they reached 30.31%-30.93% but for the petro rate fell and reached 19.55% and the nuclear it increased to 10.10% and for the other
production
increased to 9.10%.
Overall
the
rates
for
production
in the years between 1995-2005 in the first was less and it started to increase.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words pie, chart, production, rates with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "comparison" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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