The chart below shows the percentage in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following illustration depicts the
percentage
of international
students
in different Canadian provinces in 2001 and 2006. The graph shows the following cities New Brunswick, Nova Scotia, Quebec, Alberta, British Columbia, Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador,
lastly
Ontario.
Overall
, we can observe that the
percentage
of
students
had
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increased in every
city
in 2006, except
of
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the
city
of Alberto.
Also
, the highest number of international
students
in both 2001 and 2006 visited the universities in New Brunswick. More than 10% of
graduates
have
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visited the
city
of New Brunswick in 2006,
this
percentage
was slightly less in 2001, that's why about 7% of
grauduates
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graduates
were from other countries. Nova Scotia and British Columbia had the same
percentage
of international
students
in 2006.
However
, in 2001 Nova Scotia's
percentage
was higher (around 6%),
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Columbia had almost 5% the same year. More than 5% of the
graduates
of the
city
of Quebec were international in both years (around 6% in 2001;
almost
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10% in 2006). Alberta had more international
graduates
in 2001, it made up exactly 5% of all
graduates
, but in 2006
this
number
has
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slightly decreased, it made up around 3%. Universities in Ontario had increased their
percentage
of international
students
in 2006. Like in the universities in Newfoundland and Labrador.
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