The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Information about how much of the average income in five countries is spent on four basic needs is presented in a table in percentages.
Overall
, in all countries
quarter
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a quarter
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or more of the average salary goes for food,
while
in general people in all places spend the least on clothes and
entertainment
.
Turkey
and
Spain
are the only places, where their citizens spend less than 30% of their income
for
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housing - 20% in
Turkey
and 2% less than that in
Spain
.
In contrast
, 36% of a person's earnings in
Turkey
and just above 30% in
Spain
.
Nevertheless
, everywhere else the numbers for housing are above thirty going up to
thirty seven
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thirty-seven
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per cent. ,
Also
the values for food are the same as the housing prices but 10% lower. The UK and
Turkey
surprisingly have similar values for
spendings
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spending
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on clothing and
entertainment
- all around 10%. Germany's citizens spend 15% of their earnings on clothes and almost 20% on
entertainment
, drastically more than other nations. In France, only 7% of somebody's earnings go for clothes and around 13% for
entertainment
.
Finally
, In
Spain
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,Spain
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the numbers are similar to
France's
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in France's
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just slightly higher.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words entertainment, turkey, spain with synonyms.
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  • proportion of monthly household income
  • illustrates
  • cost of living
  • prioritization
  • balanced distribution
  • cultural emphasis
  • significant portion
  • reflects lifestyle
  • economic emphasis
  • category
  • allocate
  • notable amount
  • consumption pattern
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