The Charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The diagram illustrates the amount of each
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in Six areas of the globe for various needs. Overall
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as industrial, Agricultural, and Domestic Use while
also
describing the variation of use among all continent
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continents
To begin
, agriculture is one the most water
-consuming sectors in all areas and also
in most of the part
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parts
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North
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For instance
, Central Asia in 88%, Africa in 84%, South East Asia in 81% and South America in 71%.
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, among remaining two are industrial dominant as like North America is about 48% while
Europe is 53%. Correspondingly Remaining parts have a common behaviour of more use water
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Industrial
except the Southern part of Asia. Correct article usage
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To conclude
, the uses
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water
is not the same percentage in all areas in the world and has significant differences based on their geographic location and economic condition.Change preposition
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