The Charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram illustrates the amount of each

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of

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in Six areas of the globe for various needs.

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, the graph describes the purposes of

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such

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as industrial, Agricultural, and Domestic Use

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describing the variation of use among all

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.

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, agriculture is one the most

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-consuming sectors in all areas and

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in most of the

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in

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the world. In ,addition more than two-thirds of

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needs

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for the growing of seeds except

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America and Europe.

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, Central Asia in 88%, Africa in 84%, South East Asia in 81% and South America in 71%.

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, among remaining two are industrial dominant as like North America is about 48%

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Europe is 53%. Correspondingly Remaining parts have a common behaviour of more use

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water

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in comparison to

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except the Southern part of Asia.

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Additionally

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all of the other four

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has lower economic activity and households.

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, the

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water

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is not the same percentage in all areas in the world and has significant differences based on their geographic location and economic condition.