You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leaving explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding my plan to spend the weekend at your seaside hotel. We will be arriving early morning on Friday, 15th of September and we will be leaving by the afternoon on Sunday, 17th of September. Let me explain in detail about our requirements for the stay. The total number of people arriving is 4 which includes myself, my wife and my 2 daughters. We would like to book 2 double bedrooms with attached bathrooms. Amenities

such

as a TV, a sea-facing room and a room heater are a must. I would really appreciate it if you could let me know how much it will cost

according to

my specifications. I would

also

like to know a bit more about what kind of water activities are available to book during our stay.

Lastly

, some information on places of interest around the hotel will be very helpful. Thank you for your time. Yours faithfully, Nilankar Deb

Submitted by nilankar11 on Mon Sep 11 2023

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

161 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Accommodation
Arrival and departure
Sea view
Family suite
Cost estimate
Activities and amenities
Water sports
Cultural sites
Natural attractions
Places of interest
Confirmation of booking
Warm regards

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