The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The above statement illustrates the various stages of qualification of both
men
and women
after post-school in Australia in 1999.
Overall
, most of the men's
have two degrees but only a few of the Change noun form
men
women
have both. Men
are more interested in the skilled course rather than women
. but more or fewer
Correct quantifier usage
less
women
and men
are both equal in pursuing atleast
a degree.
Correct your spelling
at least
To begin
with, nearly all parents do not allow their girl child to continue their education. so that's why the percentage is low compared to men
. 70% of women
completed their undergraduate in a diploma , on the other
hand
60% of people finished their bachelor's but, skilled vocational diploma, post-graduation and masters are not as great as the above two
Add the comma(s)
,hand
In addition
, almost all the
Correct article usage
apply
men
are inrested
in diploma courses compared to degrees. Other than that 60% of people Correct your spelling
interested
got
a master's degree and between 40 -50 % of people are qualified for Verb problem
have
bachelor
Correct article usage
a bachelor
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