You have arranged to rent a new apartment, but will not be able to move in immediately due to some personal difficulties. Write a letter to the apartment owner. In your letter -describe the situation -explain why you won't be able to move in right now -say that you would like to move in at a later date.

Dear Mr Gill, I am writing to inform you that
due to
some unforeseen circumstances, I will not be able to move into the apartment on Saturday. I believe that you know that I am a working professional
I have an urgent meeting in Mumbai on coming Saturday, and I have to leave for Mumbai on Thursday.
I tried to delay the meeting, my manager denied the request.
, I have asked one of my close friends to do the shifting for me, but unfortunately, he is
out of town
week for his office trip.
, I will not be able to shift on coming Friday.
, I would be able to move on next Saturday because on weekdays I have to go to the office.
, I request you to please update the rent agreement with the latest start date for the rent period. Awaiting your prompt reply, Yours Sincerely, Jaskaran Singh Awal
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