The line graph demonstrates the number of books borrowed from four village libraries in four different months in 2014, and the pie chart displays the percentage of books borrowed by type over this period.

The line graph demonstrates the number of books borrowed from four village libraries in four different months in 2014, and the pie chart displays the percentage of books borrowed by type over this period.
The line graph demonstrates the number of
books
borrowed from four village libraries in four different months in 2014, and the pie chart displays the percentage of
books
borrowed by type over
this
period.
Overall
, West Eaton and Sutton
wood
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had a rise between June and September. In
comparison
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Ryeslip had a drop .
Furthermore
, Church Mount had fluctuated in
this
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these
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months. In the pie
chart
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we can that the most popular
types
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type
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of book that
borrowed
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was borrowed
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it
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is fiction. In comparison with Church Mount , West Eaton reached 150 in August , and he’s only in September. Ryeslip
have
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dramatically fallen from 300 pieces to one hundred seventeen . Sutton Wood
in
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the beginning,
it
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was like the others until August . After the fall, it achieved the highest results ,
300
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pieces in September. 43% of all
books
is
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fiction. Other 14 per cent each other are history and science. In comparison with science and history , 19 per cent
is
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are
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biographical
books
. And a tiny minority is
selp
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self
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books
.
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