The line graph demonstrates the number of books borrowed from four village libraries in four different months in 2014, and the pie chart displays the percentage of books borrowed by type over this period.
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books
borrowed from four village libraries in four different months in 2014, and the pie chart displays the percentage of Use synonyms
books
borrowed by type over Use synonyms
this
period.
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is fiction.
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300
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