The two pie chart below show some employment pattern in Great Britain in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts reveal information about the percentage of employment among
male
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males
female
in Fix the agreement mistake
females
manual
and non-manual categories in 1992.
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, Most of Add an article
the female
female
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females
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were keen
did
non-manual occupations, Wrong verb form
do
while
most of the male
did manual jobs in the given year. Fix the agreement mistake
males
Furthermore
, the highest percentage, which is reported for male employment pattern
, was for managerial and professional, in comparison with Fix the agreement mistake
patterns
female
, who did clerical and related more than other categories.
In the case of Fix the agreement mistake
females
female
, almost 70% of them did non-manual jobs, with 31% for clerical and related, 29% for managerial and professional and 9% for other non-manual professions respectively. The employment rate for men had a different pattern, 36% of them did managerial Fix the agreement mistake
females
thing
which was the highest proportion. Clerical and other non-manual jobs had Fix the agreement mistake
things
the
similar percentage with 6% for Correct article usage
a
the
both cases.
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male
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males
female
with 27% and 26% respectively. 24% of British Fix the agreement mistake
females
male
did other manual Fix the agreement mistake
males
works
in 1992, Fix the agreement mistake
work
while
only 2% of women did these kinds of occupations. Finally
, general labourers had the least
ratio among British Correct word choice
lowest
female
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females
as well as
British male
with only 2% and 1%.Fix the agreement mistake
males
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