The line graph beneathe proves proportion terms the changing patterns jf domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK.

The chart
beneathe
Correct your spelling
beneath
proves proportion terms the changing patterns
jf
Correct your spelling
of
domestic
access
to modern technology in homes in the UK. There
are
Change the verb form
is
show examples
only one basic general trend: upward. The
most
Change the adjective
apply
show examples
highest using is
CD
Correct article usage
the CD
show examples
player. Between 1997th and 2003 using
risedfrom
Correct your spelling
raised from
risen from
60%
t0
Correct your spelling
to
80%.
And the
Correct word choice
The
show examples
technique
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
start
Wrong verb form
started
show examples
using the
last
Internet
access
which rocked from 10% to nearly 40% for
short
Correct article usage
a short
show examples
time.
This
is shows
Change the verb form
shows
show examples
that
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
how CD
player
Fix the agreement mistake
players
show examples
used the most, the
Interner
Correct your spelling
Internet
show examples
Access
raised
speedily
Correct quantifier usage
more speedily
show examples
than
CD
Correct article usage
the CD
show examples
player
Fix the agreement mistake
players
show examples
. The percentage for the other two devices went up by varying degrees. There was
rose
Correct article usage
a rose
show examples
gradually in
Home
Correct article usage
the Home
show examples
computer
Fix the agreement mistake
computers
show examples
,
however
Add the comma(s)
,however
show examples
Mobile phone
using
Replace the word
use
show examples
flustuated
Correct your spelling
fluctuated
fluctuate
wildly, but the trend was upward.
Percentage
Correct article usage
The percentage
show examples
of using Mobile phones doubled
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
than
Replace the word
then
show examples
using Home
computer
Fix the agreement mistake
computers
show examples
in the same period. It is Noticeable that the
using
Wrong verb form
use of
show examples
Internet
access
is the lowest in
the
Change the article
apply
show examples
2003 than for the other three devices.
Submitted by dnm.best on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS

Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays:

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!