You recently hired a restaurant to host an office party at work, but there were several problems with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: Give details of the food and services you ordered Describe the problems that occurred Explain what you want the restaurant to do

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Dear sir , I am writing

this

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to give reviews about your restaurant's food and service at our office party. During the discussions regarding the office party with your

management

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we have decided

the

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on the

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apetizers

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appetisers

which

includes

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five items, lunch and dinner

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dessert for 80 people. Drinks were

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there in the decided menu.

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, your team promised to provide servers for the party and extra cost was charged to us for

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service. Unfortunately, there were many items which we have not received in actual quantity . Not only

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, servers were not enough to handle the guests because of

which

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many employees had to come forward to serve them. I would request you to have a look

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the planned menu so that our company would not be overcharged for the food and the services which are

lacked

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by your team.

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Your

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faithfully, Thank you

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

149 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings

In many countries, governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think is an appropriate use of government money?

In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about the pronlem?