You recently hired a restaurant to host an office party at work, but there were several problems with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: Give details of the food and services you ordered Describe the problems that occurred Explain what you want the restaurant to do

Dear sir , I am writing
to give reviews about your restaurant's food and service at our office party. During the discussions regarding the office party with your
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we have decided
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five items, lunch and dinner
along with
dessert for 80 people. Drinks were
there in the decided menu.
, your team promised to provide servers for the party and extra cost was charged to us for
service. Unfortunately, there were many items which we have not received in actual quantity . Not only
, servers were not enough to handle the guests because of
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many employees had to come forward to serve them. I would request you to have a look
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the planned menu so that our company would not be overcharged for the food and the services which are
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by your team.
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faithfully, Thank you
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