The graph shows the actual and predicted percentage change in employment in the UK, by education level.

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The line graph illustrates the variations of predicted rates in work with different qualification levels in the UK from 1990 till 2025.

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, it is evident that individuals with High School certificates consistently maintained the highest job rates throughout the entire period,

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those with no school certificates had the lowest employment figures. In terms of undergraduate degrees, holders of their hiring positions peaked at around 10% in 2000 after which the figure fluctuated

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, for those with high school-certified individuals it rose gradually and

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, peaked at around 30% in 2025.

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The graph shows the actual and predicted percentage change in employment in the UK, by education level.

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