the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010

the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010
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The pie charts illustrate the percentages of British Students in one university located in England who can speak other
languages
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than English in 2021 and 2010. The
languages
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are categorized into six groups.(french only, German only,
Spanish
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only, another language, two other
languages
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and no other
languages
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)
Overall
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, the
students
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number of students
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who
is
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are
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able to speak other
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increased. The most spoken language was
Spanish
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in 2000 and it protected its dominance in 2010. The number of people who can speak
Spanish
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, another and two other
languages
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was 30%, 15% and 10%, respectively in 2020. All three of them increased their proportions by 5%.
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Spanish
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protected its dominance with 35 % another and two other language categories became the second and third largest categories with proportions of 20% and 15%, respectively in 2010. Among those who can speak other
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, the only category that decreased by 15% to 10% in 2010 was French. The category of German only protects its proportion of 10%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words languages, spanish with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • British students
  • university
  • speaking other languages
  • language proficiency
  • overall trends
  • comparison
  • 2000
  • 2010
  • chart
  • data
  • percentage
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • noteworthy
  • comparative analysis
  • improvement
  • decline
  • conclusion
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