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You and your relatives are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving, what type of rooms you would like, and ask them how much the weekend will cost. Also enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to book two en-suite
rooms
 from your hotel. I am planning to stay there between the 12th and 14th of September just for
weekend
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. I will arrive there on Friday at 02:00pm and leave on Sunday at 12:30pm. My sister will accompany with me,
therefore
, we need two
rooms
 on the same floor. Could you please make sure that both
rooms
 should be non-smoker room. It would be great if you book these
rooms
 overlooking the see. We want to entertain all hotel facilities,
therefore
, I am hoping to all are operating. Could you please inform about the total cost for two nights per person and accepted payment methods? We would like to visit some interesting places which are close to your hotel. Could you do some recommendations about what kinds of activities are avalibale.
Moreover
, I would be happy if you do some suggestions about the places. I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Best Regards, Jane Fonda
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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