You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged. Write a letter to the retailer to complain. Explain why you are unhappy. Request a refund. Make arrangements to return the damaged item.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to complain about the item which I bought recently from the Decore Home website

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damaged piece. Primarily, I am Eva Smith, and bought the Buddha statue from your online page. But my experience is not superior when I checked my order it cracked from multiple places. As I feel very disappointed.

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, I want you to have to money back because my order was not in excellent condition.

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, as soon as possible, you can change my piece with another piece of statue.

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, you have to refund my all payments within 10 days. All in all, you ask your store worker who can pick up the faulty order at my address.

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, I can personally visit their store to return the item on 23 September 2023. I hope you are there at that time. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely, Eva Smith.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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157 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing to express my disappointment
I regret to inform you that
I am dissatisfied with the item I received
The item arrived damaged
The product is in unsatisfactory condition
I expected better quality
I would like to request a refund
I kindly ask for your assistance in resolving this matter
I would appreciate it if you could provide instructions
I suggest arranging a pick-up service
I expect a prompt response and resolution
I hope for a satisfactory outcome

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