You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged. Write a letter to the retailer to complain. Explain why you are unhappy. Request a refund. Make arrangements to return the damaged item.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to complain about the item which I bought recently from the Decore Home website

that is

damaged piece. Primarily, I am Eva Smith, and bought the Buddha statue from your online page. But my experience is not superior when I checked my order it cracked from multiple places. As I feel very disappointed.

Furthermore

, I want you to have to money back because my order was not in excellent condition.

Besides

this

, as soon as possible, you can change my piece with another piece of statue.

Otherwise

, you have to refund my all payments within 10 days. All in all, you ask your store worker who can pick up the faulty order at my address.

Moreover

, I can personally visit their store to return the item on 23 September 2023. I hope you are there at that time. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely, Eva Smith.

Submitted by rajveersra55 on Tue Sep 19 2023

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