write email to manager about your work form last year what you did what do you think you could improve a traning request

Dear Sir, I am writing
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email to inform you I have completed my one year in
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organization. I have seen we have to do drastic modifications to improve our business website, to make it more user-friendly for our customers.
Last
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year, I developed an e-commerce platform for our organization to sell our Catalogued Know Edge to our customers. I was assigned to design the interface for the customers and our employees to operate the website. At the time of development of
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app, I faced lots of app challenges Because of my limited education and knowledge, I did add some advanced features to
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application. I suggest that if we can provide an online payment operation on our website it will help us to improve our sales. We have to build
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application. My humble request arrange some workshop training related to technical and application development.
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, some advanced training is
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available on the portal. Please allow me to attend
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training and workshops to improve my knowledge. I am eagerly waiting for your reply and approval of my training request. Sincerely, Akanksha Tiwari

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