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You recently heard about some new jobs at a local department store. You would like to work there. Write a letter to store manager of the department store. In your letter, -Explain how you heard about the job -Describe the kind of job you would like to have -Give details of your experience and qualifications

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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 letter to respond to an advertisement which was placed on our
university
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's wall. To write the truth these days I am a student. Unfortunately, I prefer
work
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. I study at a
university
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 called Tashkent State
University
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 of Law and I have been studying in
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university
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 for two years. To be honest, I can not afford to pay my contract that's why I want to
work
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 in our local department store.
Firstly
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, during these two years, I did not
work
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. It is true that I want to
work
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 to be a secretary but I do not choose my
work
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. I would be grateful if I could be secretary. Please contact me at any time should you wish to arrange a meeting. I would welcome the opportunity to meet with you and speak with you in person. I look forward to your answer as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Sanjarbek Shokirjonov.

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