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The given pie charts compare the proportion of water consumption for various goals in six regions of the globe.

The given pie charts compare the proportion of water consumption for various goals in six regions of the globe.
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The given pie charts compare the proportion of
water
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 consumption for various goals in six regions of the globe.
Overall
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, in 4 areas namely South East
Asia
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, Central
Asia
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,
Africa
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 and South
America
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, agricultural
water
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use
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 contributed to higher percentages and lower percentages for domestic and industrial usage.
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, in Europe and North ,
America
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water
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 proportions for industrial purposes accounted for higher than in other parts.
Water
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 consumed for Agricultural
use
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 in Central
Asia
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 represented the highest rate at 88% between different regions. Meanwhile,
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 figure for
Africa
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 at 84%, South
Asia
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 at 81 %, and South
America
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 at 71% contributed to a higher rate. In Europe and North
America
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, the percentage of
water
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 used for Industrial means was 48% and 53% respectively which was higher than the allocation of
water
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 for other purposes. Interestingly, in three areas namely South East
Asia
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 Central
Asia
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 and ,
Africa
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 the allocation of domestic
water
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 was exactly the same at 7% of the total waste
use
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. and Agricultural
water
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use
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 in
Africa
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 was relatively low at 7%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, asia, africa, america, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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