The given pie charts compare the proportion of water consumption for various goals in six regions of the globe.

The given pie charts compare the proportion of water consumption for various goals in six regions of the globe.
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The given pie charts compare the proportion of
water
consumption for various goals in six regions of the globe.
Overall
, in 4 areas namely South East
Asia
, Central
Asia
,
Africa
and South
America
, agricultural
water
use
contributed to higher percentages and lower percentages for domestic and industrial usage.
However
, in Europe and North ,
America
 
water
proportions for industrial purposes accounted for higher than in other parts.
Water
consumed for Agricultural
use
in Central
Asia
represented the highest rate at 88% between different regions. Meanwhile,
this
figure for
Africa
at 84%, South
Asia
at 81 %, and South
America
at 71% contributed to a higher rate. In Europe and North
America
, the percentage of
water
used for Industrial means was 48% and 53% respectively which was higher than the allocation of
water
for other purposes. Interestingly, in three areas namely South East
Asia
Central
Asia
and ,
Africa
the allocation of domestic
water
was exactly the same at 7% of the total waste
use
. and Agricultural
water
use
in
Africa
was relatively low at 7%.
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