The chart below shoes the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shoes the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
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demonstrate
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the percentage of
househods
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households
in
walse
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wales
Walse
and
england
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England
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between 1918 and 2011, comparing rented houses with owned accommodations. Despite the fluctuations,
it is clear that
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the hosehold
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hosehold
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household
in renting houses increased with time
while
the once
in
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owned accommodation decreased
.
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Also
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, it is noticeable that rented places households was higher than owned accommodation household until 1971 when it changed to the opposite.
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