The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented pictures depict a breakdown of
crime
-related data in the UK
for the past year, specified by types
of crime
and criminals' age
.
The line graph illustrates the correlation between crime
and the age
of offenders. According to
the graph, the age
at which people in the UK
start to commit crimes is 8. There is a small increase from 0 to 50,000 people between ages 8 and 12, which dramatically rockets afterward
and reaches 700,000 at the Change the spelling
afterwards
age
of 16. Most of the criminals, 800,000, are 20 years old as the crime
rate peaks at this
time. Between 20 and 28 years old, the crime
rate is falling sharply and hits the number of 200,000. From 28 straight on, the number of crime
-makers is decreasing steadily and stops at the level of a bit less than 100,000 by the age
of 60.
The pie chart gives information about the crime
types
, the most popular of which is violet crime
with 46%. Property and drug types
are almost at the same level of popularity with 23% for the former and 22% for the latter. The least widespread kind is the public order crime
, which takes only 9% of overall
crimes committed in the UK
during the last
year.
In conclusion, for the last
year, the law was violated mostly by young UK
citizens ages 12-28, with the highest number of 20-year-old offenders: 800,000. Talking about the crime
types
, the violent crime
type was the most committed with 46%.Submitted by ritusia.ru on
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