The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant
Information concerning female working rates in six particular countries for the period of two centuries from 1960 to 1980 is given in the bar chart. The information can be divided into two groups, increasing and decreasing trends. It is immediately apparent that the
overall
figures increased over the period in most countries with the exception of the USSR.
To begin
with, there were five countries had
a growth in Correct pronoun usage
that had
women
workers. By far the highest rates of female employees in the final year was Sweden, with the figure increasing from above 50% to 70% between 1960 and 1980 respectively. The most noticeable growth was in the women
employment ratios in Canada. Despite Change noun form
women's
the
Correct article usage
apply
Canadian
having the lowest figure in 1960, Replace the word
Canada
this
almost 20% increasing
over the given timeline from just over 30% to above 50% in 1980. Not only were the Change the form of the verb
increase
rate
of women
employing
in the final year in Canada more Wrong verb form
employed
over
50%, but Australia and the UK Change preposition
than
also
showed the same rates. Even though those began as just 40% and 50%, respectively. However
, the female occupational rate
in the USA had the smallest change, even reached
its peak at almost 50% in 1970 but generally fluctuated around 40%.
In marked contrast, The USSR was the only Wrong verb form
reaching
exceptional
to Replace the word
exception
this
upward tend
. Correct your spelling
trend
Although
the rate
of women
employment stood Change noun form
women's
the
highest Change preposition
at the
rate
by far as
over 70% at the beginning of the period, the figures depicted a gradual fall to around 65% in the final year.Correct word choice
apply
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