The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The bar graph compares the passing rates of driving license tests between males and females belonging to a country in Asia from 1980 to 2010.
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increased steadily to 50% in 2000 at which point it peaked and was stagnant for 10 years. In general, women had higher pass proportions throughout the period compared to men, with a difference of about 20% maintained throughout the 30-year period.Linking Words
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