The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The illustrations present the processes and the equipment needed for
cement
and concrete productions.
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Overall
, both processes need a Linking Words
mixer
. Use synonyms
Cement
is composed of not only clay but limestone, Use synonyms
while
the concrete needs another Linking Words
ingredients
at the specific ration. Interestingly, heat and other machinery to the Use synonyms
cement
and concrete productions.
Limestone and clay are the main Use synonyms
ingredients
for Use synonyms
cement
production. These Use synonyms
ingredients
are ground to powder. Use synonyms
Next,
it is passed through the Linking Words
mixer
and the rotating heater. In Use synonyms
this
stage heat is needed Linking Words
while
the heater is rotating. The processed mixture is Linking Words
then
made to become finished Linking Words
cement
by the grinder before being packed in the bag.
In the process of concrete production the are four key Use synonyms
ingredients
, which are gravel, sand, Use synonyms
cement
, and water with the accurate ratio of 50 : 25 : 15 : 10 in order. These Use synonyms
ingredients
are Use synonyms
then
poured into the Linking Words
mixer
in order to to form the finished concrete. The Use synonyms
mixer
spins at the coistent pace to rotate all mixtures together.Use synonyms
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