The line graph gives information about percentage changes in total crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality, 1995-1998. Summarise the information and make comparison where relevant.

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The display line graph gives data about percentage changes in total crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality, 1995-1998. In a burglary, in 2010 it was 3300, in 2011 it was 3700, in 2012 it was 3200, in 2014 it was 1500, in 2015 it was 1000, in 2016 it was 1500, in 2017 it was 1400, in 2018 it was 1500 and in 2019 it was 1400. In car theft, in 2010 and 2011 it was 2700, in 2014 it was it was 2000,

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it increased by more than 2500 in 2017, in 2018 it was 2500 and in 2019 it was 2700. In the robbery, in 2010, 2011, and 2012 it was 700, in 2014 it was 600, in 2015 it was 500, in 2016 it increased by 800

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in 2019 it was 700.

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, the above information describes the percentage change in total crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality, 1995-1998.

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The line graph gives information about percentage changes in total crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality, 1995-1998. Summarise the information and make comparison where relevant.

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Your recently visited a store and didn't like the customer service there. Write a complaint letter to the store manager and say -What was the issue there? -Why wasn't the staff helpful? -Suggest what can be done about it