You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
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The pie chart depicts the percentage of how working adults spend time on six activities in the
year
1958 and 2008.
Overall
, it is evident that the most prefered
activity is working Correct your spelling
preferred
that
remains the Correct word choice
which
most
favourite in both Correct quantifier usage
apply
the
years. Correct article usage
apply
However
, the least activity prefered
was travel to work ,playing sports or other activity of their interest and going out with friends and family.
In detail, the Correct your spelling
preferred
people
who Correct quantifier usage
number of people
preferd
to work was 33 Correct your spelling
prefer
preferred
percent
in 1958 which increased by 7 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
year
2008.Similarly
, playing sports or following other interest
and travel to work Fix the agreement mistake
interests
also
increased by 2 percent
and 6 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
which shares Change the spelling
per cent
equal
place in the Add an article
an equal
year
2008.Also
, people prefering
to relax at home was 8 Correct your spelling
preferring
prefer
percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
year
1958 which reaches
Wrong verb form
reached
to
13 Change preposition
apply
percent
in 2008.
In terms of people who prefer activities Change the spelling
per cent
such
as sleeping, going
out with friends or families tend to decrease Correct word choice
and going
with
19 Change preposition
to
percent
and 32 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
year
1958 whereas
in 2008 it was recorded at 6 percent
and 25 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
respectivelty
.Correct your spelling
respectively
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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