You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The pie chart depicts the percentage of how working adults spend time on six activities in the

year

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1958 and 2008.

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, it is evident that the most

prefered

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preferred

activity is working

that

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which

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remains the

most

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apply

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favourite in both

the

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apply

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years.

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, the least activity

prefered

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preferred

was travel to work ,playing sports or other activity of their interest and going out with friends and family. In detail, the

people

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number of people

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who

preferd

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prefer

preferred

to work was 33

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percent

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per cent

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in 1958 which increased by 7

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percent

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per cent

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in the

year

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2008.

Similarly

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, playing sports or following other

interest

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interests

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and travel to work

also

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increased by 2

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percent

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per cent

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and 6

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percent

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per cent

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which shares

equal

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an equal

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place in the

year

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2008.

Also

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, people

prefering

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preferring

prefer

to relax at home was 8

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percent

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per cent

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in the

year

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1958 which

reaches

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reached

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to

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apply

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13

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percent

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per cent

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in 2008. In terms of people who prefer activities

such

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as sleeping,

going

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and going

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out with friends or families tend to decrease

with

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to

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19

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percent

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per cent

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and 32

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percent

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per cent

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in the

year

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1958

whereas

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in 2008 it was recorded at 6

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percent

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per cent

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and 25

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percent

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per cent

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respectivelty

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respectively

.