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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart depicts the percentage of citizens (male and female) in the UK taking almost five portions of fruits and vegetables by different
age
group
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groups
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 in the year 2006.
Overall
, it is evident that all ages consume fruits and vegetables but the
age
group
 55 to 64 consumes the most
whereas
 the least was from 19 to 24
age
group
.Female consumption always beats the men in every
age
group
. In detail,the consumption of fruits and vegetables by the young ones was almost 15 per
cent
( male and female).
Then
, in different
age
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groups
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group
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,group
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 it got increased by 5 per
cent
 every time till
age
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the age
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group
 35 to 44.Afterwards, it was constant for the 45 to 54
age
group
.But for the 55 to 64 years of
age
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the age
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group
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 it reached almost 30 per
cent
 and 35 per
cent
 for males and females respectively. In the
age
group
 65-74, it showed a downward trend constituting 30 per
cent
 and almost 26 per
cent
 for females and males respectively.
Finally
, for the
age
group
 ,75 it remained equal which was 25 per
cent
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, group, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • balanced diet
  • fruit and vegetable intake
  • recommendations
  • percentage
  • males
  • females
  • age group
  • consumption
  • comparison
  • analyze
  • increase
  • intake
  • statistics
  • data
  • trend
  • healthy lifestyle
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