The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram demonstrates how rainwater is gathered and prepared for use as drinking
water
in a town in Australia and the various stages involved in making it suitable for drinking. Overall
, this
process involves three main stages: water
filtration, storage, and treatment
.
In the first step, rainwater that falls down on the roof of a house is directed through a pipe that is
at the side of the house. Then
it runs down the drain fixed at the bottom of the house. The next step is
filtering to remove impurities that contaminate water
collected from homes. After completing this
stage, the water
flows to the storage tank. That filtered water
then
goes to the treatment
tank.
Prior to being distributed to houses, the water
has been treated with chemicals. This
chemical treatment
is completed at the treatment
tank. Chemicals are added in order to sterilize the water
. As a result
of this
purification method, water
is ready for human consumption.
Finally
, the processed water
is supplied to the houses through pipelines for daily domestic purposes.Submitted by subha.mri on
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