The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram demonstrates how rainwater is gathered and prepared for use as drinking
water
in a town in Australia and the various stages involved in making it suitable for drinking. Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
this
process involves three main stages: Linking Words
water
filtration, storage, and Use synonyms
treatment
.
In the first step, rainwater that falls down on the roof of a house is directed through a pipe Use synonyms
that is
at the side of the house. Linking Words
Then
it runs down the drain fixed at the bottom of the house. Linking Words
The next step is
filtering to remove impurities that contaminate Linking Words
water
collected from homes. After completing Use synonyms
this
stage, the Linking Words
water
flows to the storage tank. That filtered Use synonyms
water
Use synonyms
then
goes to the Linking Words
treatment
tank.
Prior to being distributed to houses, the Use synonyms
water
has been treated with chemicals. Use synonyms
This
chemical Linking Words
treatment
is completed at the Use synonyms
treatment
tank. Chemicals are added in order to sterilize the Use synonyms
water
. Use synonyms
As a result
of Linking Words
this
purification method, Linking Words
water
is ready for human consumption.
Use synonyms
Finally
, the processed Linking Words
water
is supplied to the houses through pipelines for daily domestic purposes.Use synonyms
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