The graphs below give information about coputer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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of people

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their computers during the

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2002 and 2010, and

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by the different education in 2002 and

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2010. Generally, using the

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as property increased

year

by

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higher education own them much more than the lower. In the

year

2002

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,2002

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it was over 50 per

cent

residents

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of residents

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own

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their computer and the rate rose

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10 per

cent

in

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every 2

year

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. The rate almost reached 80 per

cent

of the population in 2010

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people own their computers

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on their level of education. It is about 15 in 100 people

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who didn’t

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graduate high school

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on

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their computers in 2002

while

a bit more than 40 in 100 in 2010. And

also

noticeable

diferently

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differently

the

propotion

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proportion

of

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postgraduate qualifications was 2 in 3 in

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2002 compared with approximately 100 per

cent

in 2010.