the chart below shows the value of one country export in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage change in value of export in 2016
The provided bar chart illustrates the export earnings of a particular country in different spheres from 2015 to 2016.
In addition
, the table depicts the portion change in value of sell
in 2016.
Replace the word
sales
Overall
, the biggest earnings come from the petrolium
products. Correct your spelling
petroleum
In contrast
, the lowest value was from the textiles. Moreover
, the biggest increasing
in the value among all the categories was made by the textiles.
Change the form of the verb
increase
According to
the bar chart, the
petroleum products brought Correct article usage
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the
similar amount of money (just above 60 Correct article usage
a
billion
dollars
) in the
both years and increased by 3%. Remove the article
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Then
, the engineered goods accounted for about 55 billion
dollars
in 2015 and just above 60 billion
dollars
in 2016(increased by 8,5%). The following category which is the
gems and jewellery Correct article usage
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contibuted
approximately 40 Correct your spelling
contributed
billions
equally in Change to singular
billion
the
both years(decreased by 5,18%). The remaining agricultural products and textiles accounted for equal earnings (just above 30 Remove the article
apply
billions
) in 2016. Change to singular
billion
However
, the former brought around 30 billions
and grew by Change to singular
billion
the
merely Correct article usage
apply
0,81
%, Correct your spelling
0.81
while
the latter contributed only around 25 billion
of
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dollars
and soared by the
significantly 15,24%.Correct article usage
apply
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