The charts below show proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition English, in 2000 and 2010.

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The provided pie charts compare the variation in the percentages of learners at a particular England university in

Biritain

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Britain

who are multilingual

along with

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English

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the English

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language

over a period of one decade.

Overall

, It is evident that

Spanish

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the Spanish

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language

is the most popular

language

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incomparison with others

whereas

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expeienced

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experienced

similarities over the period.

To begin

with, despite

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Spanish

only being the highest proportion throughout both charts, it started

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30% in 2000 without a considerable gap in 2010 and reached merely

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35%. Considering no other

language

, it positioned in the second highest popularity after

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Spanish

only in 2000 and accounted for 20% , and superseded by another

language

in 2010, bringing it to

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level

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after

being at 15% and depicted the same

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per cent

with

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fresh

only in the beginning of the period. Turning to commonalities,

it is clear that

other items illustrate constantly the same proportion and all of them boasted at 10%. When two other languages and German only were equally at 10% in 2000, they remained plateau and combined with no other languages and

frensh

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french

only in 2010. Reflecting that citizens vary in preference for miscellaneous languages.

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