The charts below show proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition English, in 2000 and 2010.

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The provided pie charts compare the variation in the percentages of learners at a particular England university in

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Britain

who are multilingual

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along with

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English

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the English

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over a period of one decade.

Overall

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, It is evident that

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the Spanish

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is the most popular

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incomparison with others

whereas

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the remaining items

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experienced

similarities over the period.

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Spanish

only being the highest proportion throughout both charts, it started

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30% in 2000 without a considerable gap in 2010 and reached merely

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35%. Considering no other

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, it positioned in the second highest popularity after

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only in 2000 and accounted for 20% , and superseded by another

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in 2010, bringing it to

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level

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being at 15% and depicted the same

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per cent

with

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fresh

only in the beginning of the period. Turning to commonalities,

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other items illustrate constantly the same proportion and all of them boasted at 10%. When two other languages and German only were equally at 10% in 2000, they remained plateau and combined with no other languages and

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french

only in 2010. Reflecting that citizens vary in preference for miscellaneous languages.

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The charts below show proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition English, in 2000 and 2010.

Spoken communication is more important than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, employees do overtime and get more stressed than before. What a the reasons for this? What can employers do to make people's life easier? Explain your point of view with reasons and examples from your knowledge or experience.

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Some people believe that the government spend too much money on wildlife protection projects and the money should be used for other things. Do you agree or disagree?