Do the dangerous derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages

Most of the

foods

are transported long distances from

food

production

centers

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to supermarkets

to

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and in order to preserve all the freshness of

foods

,

those

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are handled with different

chemicals

that can be harmful

for

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human's

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health.

However

, in my

opinion

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the advantages of

such

chemicals

overweight the disadvantages of using them. The biggest fear of

people

when it comes to fruits and vegetables that are processed with

chemicals

, is that they can create difficulties in

digestive

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system

as well as

cause

diarrhia

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diarrhoea

. These concerns can be true when

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excessive amount of those

chemicals

end up in

people

's bodies. It can even

cause

problems in children's development, if a dangerous chemical is contained in their

food

, especially in ready-made purees for babies. When consumed in

big

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proportions, these

chemicals

that are only meant to preserve the

foods

when transported

,

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can

cause

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indeed

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serious

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dangerous for our health.

Nevertheless

, in my opinion, all of the fresh ingredients can be peeled and left with the

serfice

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service

that is

untouched

with

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chemicals

, which

then

becomes safer to consume. If

people

want to have fresh ingredients that contain all the

necessery

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necessary

nutrients and vitamins even after long

transportations

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of

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those

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, all the

chemicals

used in

food

production

as well as

preservation, are beneficial. Without these

chemicals

, the

life-span

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of

food

becomes shorter resulting in a lot of

food

waste across the globe, which will

cause

environmental problems

of

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the area and

becomes

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economically unsustainable.

To conclude

,

although

the

dangerous

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derived from the use of

chemicals

should not be

ingnored

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ignored

, in my opinion, their usage helps to preserve

foods

in a fresh state for longer periods of time keeping them

nutricious

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nutritious

and beneficial for

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people

.

However

,

people

should start peeling

the

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fruits and vegetables in order to minimize the amount

chemicals

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of chemicals

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ending

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up in their bodies.