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Do the dangerous derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages

#chemicals #food #production #preservation
Most of the
foods
 are transported long distances from
food
 production
centers
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 to supermarkets
to
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and in order to preserve all the freshness of
foods
,
those
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they
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 are handled with different
chemicals
 that can be harmful
for
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to
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human's
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human
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 health.
However
, in my
opinion
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opinion,
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 the advantages of
such
chemicals
 overweight the disadvantages of using them. The biggest fear of
people
 when it comes to fruits and vegetables that are processed with
chemicals
, is that they can create difficulties in
digestive
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the digestive
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 system
as well as
cause
diarrhia
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diarrhoea
. These concerns can be true when
the
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an
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 excessive amount of those
chemicals
 end up in
people
's bodies. It can even
cause
 problems in children's development, if a dangerous chemical is contained in their
food
, especially in ready-made purees for babies. When consumed in
big
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 proportions, these
chemicals
 that are only meant to preserve the
foods
 when transported
,
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apply
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 can
cause
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indeed
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serious
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seriously
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 dangerous for our health.
Nevertheless
, in my opinion, all of the fresh ingredients can be peeled and left with the
serfice
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service
that is
 untouched
with
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chemicals
, which
then
 becomes safer to consume. If
people
 want to have fresh ingredients that contain all the
necessery
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necessary
 nutrients and vitamins even after long
transportations
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transportation
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of
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apply
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those
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apply
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, all the
chemicals
 used in
food
 production
as well as
 preservation, are beneficial. Without these
chemicals
, the
life-span
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lifespan
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 of
food
 becomes shorter resulting in a lot of
food
 waste across the globe, which will
cause
 environmental problems
of
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in
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 the area and
becomes
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become
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 economically unsustainable.
To conclude
,
although
 the
dangerous
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dangers
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 derived from the use of
chemicals
 should not be
ingnored
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ignored
, in my opinion, their usage helps to preserve
foods
 in a fresh state for longer periods of time keeping them
nutricious
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nutritious
 and beneficial for
the
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people
.
However
,
people
 should start peeling
the
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apply
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fruits and vegetables in order to minimize the amount
chemicals
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of chemicals
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ending
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that end
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 up in their bodies.
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