WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Last week, you celebrated your birthday with some friends in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed yourselves very much. Write a letter to the restaurant. In your letter mention the food and service explain that you really enjoyed the atmosphere suggest any improvements to make things better You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my gratitude and let you know how much I enjoyed celebrating my 33rd birthday at your restaurant

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Friday the 19th of September. First of all, let me congratulate the service staff, as the attention provided by them was excellent. I would like to make a special mention to Jane, who made sure that everything was going well at every moment.

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, the food was exceptional. Not only it was delicious but

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innovative. Everyone had a great time and it has to be said that it was partly

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the great atmosphere. The decoration and live music made everyone relax and had a great time chatting and even dancing to the music.

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, I would like to, kindly, make a small suggestion. Two of my friends are vegetarians and they found the menu lacks

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vegetarian options. Thank you again for the service provided. Yours faithfully, Sara.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

163 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Grateful, appreciation, memorable celebration
Delectable, sumptuous, culinary delights
Attentive, courteous, top-notch service
Vibrant, cozy, inviting ambiance
Constructive feedback, recommendations
Enhance, optimize, refine
Loyalty, patronage, looking forward

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